Intervention – Scene 11
Jul 8th, 2008 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized ScreenplayEXT. OUTSIDE SENATORS DOOR — NIGHT
Dick is trying to help Jane down the steps. Jane resists and
breaks free and pin balls off a topiary and into a tree, gets
her bearings, brushes off Dick’s help and forces her hand
into his jacket pocket. She pulls out the car keys.
DICK
Honey, give me the keys.
JANE
Back off.
DICK
Honey, please.
JANE
Ok then, piss off!
DICK
Sweetie, you’ve had too much.
JANE
Ya think, Dick?
Jane nears the car and presses madly at the key fob, hitting
the alarm button. The horn blares.
JANE (CONT’D)
Fuck….
She pushes every button; the trunk opens. She pushes more
buttons, but nothing helps. Finally, she throws the keys at
the car window. The car horn doesn’t care.
The crowd at the house stares. Dick crawls to the keys and
urgently presses a button and the car alarm shuts off.
As Dick looks up with the keys in his hand, Jane forces the
heel of her pump onto his hand on the grass.
DICK
Jesus, Jane, you’re hurting me.
JANE
Give me the keys.
DICK (RELEASING KEYS)
You can’t drive.
Jane lets her foot slowly off his hands, as Dick wraps his
fingers in his other hand. Jane stumbles to the driver’s
door. She drunkenly aims the fob and hits the button once;
nothing…twice…nothing. The third time, the locks open.
JANE
Always the third time.
Jane falls into the driver’s seat. Dick crawls into the
passenger seat nursing his hand.
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At this point I would have slapped her accross the face. Hehe. She’s such a bitch. You really created a real good Bitch woman out of Jane. Great job! I’m off to the next one.
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Tasha, the frightening part is, way too many people thought I wrote Jane after meeting an ex wife or girlfriend. I thought for a bit she was over board. But apparently not. But I do love how evil she is. BTW, she gets MUCH worse.
Thanks for the comments. I love em.
PlotDog