Intervention – Scene 14
Jul 30th, 2008 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay 
INT. CAR IN USED CAR LOT — MOMENTS LATER
DICK
Stop the car. Trade me places.
Jane whips the car into a spot, drops her seat back and turns
the car off, smiling. Dick drops his seat back; an instant
later, blue and red lights flash on the dash. The car engine
ticks down. A spot light scans the lot.
DICK
We can’t just hide.
Jane closes her eyes like she is sleeping.
DICK
Damn-it. Fuck.
Dick ducks; his eyes frantically search for a solution. The
police lights scan the lot like a prison yard. He opens the
door a touch and the roof light flashes. He jerks the door
closed. He puts his window down. He slides out the window.
EXT. USED CAR LOT — CONTINUOUS
Dick sneaks around the back of the car and jerks open the
driver’s side door. The police lights close in, as Dick
grabs Jane’s limp body from the seat. Dick drags Jane behind
the car; Jane is barely drunkenly awake. Dick’s feet slip in
the dirt behind the car and Jane flops face first on the
trunk of the car. Dick steps up behind her and grabs Jane
around the waist. Jane wakes and presses her ass into Dick.
JANE
You know I like it rough.
Dick freezes for a second, as Jane grinds aggressively.
DICK
Son-of-a-bitch.
The instant he says bitch, a cop’s flood light blazes into
his eyes. Dick freezes.
COP (FROM BEHIND SPOT LIGHT)
Show me your hands!
Dick tries to free his hands, but Jane’s body nearly falls to
the ground. He grabs back on.
COP
Show me your hands!
DICK
She’s my wife; she’ll fall.
The COP steps forward, drawing his gun and blocking a bit of
light; red and blue lights take the place of the spot.
COP
On the ground, BOTH of you.
DICK
She’s drunk.
COP
On the ground!
More cops flood the lot with guns drawn. The sound of a
shell being chambered in a shot gun intrudes from the side.
OTHER COP
HANDS UP!
Uncounted cops come from every direction racing at Dick.
Dick drops Jane and thrusts his hands up like an idiot.
An angry cop snags Dick and tosses him to the ground roughly.
Dick reaches for Jane one last time, but his hand is grabbed
and twisted behind his back. Another cop roughly flips
Jane’s drunk body, forcing his knee in her back and cuffing
her.
DICK
I was driving. I was driving.
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Such a weakling husband you made Dick to be. But you must do it for your story’s sake.
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Tasha,
Dick didn’t necessarily start out that way, but for some reason my characters really do take on a life of their own. Sometimes I am writing and yelling at them to stop it, but they just keep being themselves until they are ready to learn. A bit like having kids. Trust me things have to get worse for the poor guy, before they get better, but he is our long suffering protagonist and over all actual good guy.