Intervention – Scene 30
Jan 24th, 2009 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay
INT. DICK AND JANE'S BED ROOM -- NIGHT
Dick and Jane move about the room in a routine. Dick is
drunk and Jane carries a big tumbler of dark liquid.
Dick frowns, walks to Jane, takes her drink and tests it.
DICK
It's coke. You going to tell
them?
JANE
Tell them what?
Dick points to the trash can.
DICK
When were you going to tell me?
JANE
When were you going to tell me
you knew?
DICK
My fault "again"?
JANE
Then be a man and be direct.
Dick straightens, then slumps and steals a sip of Coke.
DICK
Fine, I don't want to be a single
parent while you chase your
career.
JANE
I have a call to make.
Jane picks up her cell and heads into the hall.
INT. UPSTAIRS HALLWAY -- MOMENTS LATER
Jane dials the number and the phone rings.
JANE'S MOTHER
Yes, Jane.
JANE
Mother, how are you?
JANE'S MOTHER
As well as can be expected.
JANE
How long until the trial?
JANE'S MOTHER
Six months.
Jane paces, waiting to get to her news.
JANE'S MOTHER (CONT'D)
They denied bail and froze his
assets. I have to find another
solution soon.
JANE
When are you going to file?
JANE'S MOTHER
I'm sure I have no idea what you
are talking about.
Jane's voice remains calm even as her pacing speeds up.
JANE
I imagine he will get divorce
papers days after conviction.
JANE'S MOTHER
How are things for you?
JANE
You...are going to be a
grandmother.
JANE'S MOTHER
Who's is it?
JANE
It is your grandchild.
JANE'S MOTHER
Don't let it call me grandmother.
JANE
Love you, Mother.
The line goes dead and Jane heads for the bedroom.
Dick sits on the bed. The phone shakes in Jane's hand.
DICK
Your mother?
JANE
She won't change.
DICK
Who does?
JANE
We can work it out.
Jane undresses and slides into bed. She pats the bed
JANE (CONT'D)
Come to bed; we will deal with
this after you have had less to
drink.
He lies down and he slides to her to snuggle.
JANE (CONT'D)
I don't think I can do sex until
after the baby. Can you take
care of it yourself in the
bathroom? It all makes me want
to be sick.
Dick rolls over and sighs.
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Tags: intervention, Serialized Screenplay, serialized suspense, suspense screenplay
Wow! A marriage made in heaven, not!
No wonder Jane behaves the way she does. She didn’t have a good role model in her mother, eh? Good writing.
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