Intervention – Scene 38
Apr 18th, 2009 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay Carl wanders over to Dick who is at the grill. Dick looks
over at Jane and gets her attention. He looks at his watch
and pretends to hold a fork and eat. Jane shakes her head
no and looks at the parking lot again.
Dick takes a burger to Susan, who openly flirts.
Jane moves past Carl with a sneer.
JANE
Guess Dick will take care of
Susan.
CARL
Anything you need help with?
JANE
Not now, damn it.
Carl slugs down the rest of the scotch.
CARL
I need another drink.
JANE
The good stuff is in the house.
Carl strolls off with a totter toward the house. Jane
moves toward another couple and is intercepted by Alex.
JANE (CONT'D)
Anything from Dick?
ALEX
Just playing with the kiddo and
the other guy's wife.
JANE
Watch him. A bit more alcohol
and he'll show his dark side.
Jane glances at Carl entering the house and has a thought.
ALEX
I know my jobs; both of 'em.
Jane walks over and calls Dick away from Susan. Alex
remains in Jane's wake.
JANE
Dick, I think Sara is bored.
Alex watches, as Dick bounds off happily to his daughter.
Jane sits with Susan, who is somewhat sober after food.
JANE (CONT'D)
You feeling better?
SUSAN
The food helped; I'm sorry.
JANE
It's ok. Stick together. Right?
SUSAN
You have no idea how hard it is
to be ignored; like you don't
matter while he has eyes for
other women.
JANE
I might know more than you think.
Susan reaches for a nearly empty wine cooler; Jane moves
it.
JANE (CONT'D)
Let me talk to Carl.
Jane makes like she is joking.
JANE (CONT'D)
Tell you what, Dick is boring me
to death, so, you kill Dick and I
will whack Carl and we will be
even.
They both laugh. The lights are on in Jane's eyes. Jane
rises and strolls toward Carl who is just coming outside.
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There’s something definitely brewing on the horizon. I can’t wait to find out.
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