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Scene 40 – Intervention – A Serial Suspense Screenplay

Aug 30th, 2009 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

The continuation of the Serial Suspense Screenplay "Intervention" by Terry L. Raun. To read this from the beginning go HERE. We will be starting to post a new scene at least once every two weeks; hopefully more frequently. We apologize to the faithful readers to this point for the hiatus.


               EXT. DICK AND JANE'S DRIVE WAY -- MOMENTS LATER

               The black car of the Senator pulls into the drive.

               INT. DICK AND JANE'S KITCHEN -- MOMENTS LATER

               Jane is distracted.  She spots Dick at the door. 

                                   JANE
                         Come on Baby, faster, harder.

               EXT. DICK AND JANE'S KITCHEN DOOR -- MOMENTS LATER

               Dick hears the sound of the car in the driveway.  He looks
               at it.  Senator Stewart steps out.

                                   DICK
                         Oh fuck.

               INT. DICK AND JANE'S KITCHEN -- MOMENTS LATER

               Carl's eyes are glazed.  He is collapses on Jane over the
               sink.

               The door creaks open.  Jane pushes Carl off her,
               straightens her skirt, turns and kisses Carl lightly.

                                   JANE
                         Thanks Carl, you don't know how
                         much good that did me.

                                   CARL
                         Did you, I mean, was it good?

                                   JANE
                         It achieved my purpose. 

               With no shame, Jane puts her thong back on like she is
               getting dressed alone.

                                   JANE (CONT'D)
                         I hope Susan and Dick never find
                         out.  Don't you, Baby?

               Carl bolts for the bathroom, shorts at his knees.

               EXT. THE DOOR TO THE YARD OFF THE KITCHEN -- MOMENTS LATER

               Jane heads out the door, she passes Dick with a smile.
               Dick stands back from the door and watches confused, as
               Jane breezes past and toward the Senator's car.

               INT. KITCHEN -- MOMENTS LATER

               Dick finds two scotch glasses on the counter.  One with
               Jane's lipstick.  He, grabs the scotch glass with ice and
               heads out the door toward Jane.

                                   DICK
                         (to himself)  That's fucking it.

To read the suspense screenplay “Intervention” from the Beginning go HERE

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  1. Hm…. I wonder wha Dick’s comment meant. Can’t wait to know more. I smell something and it doesn’t smell good. Hee, hee.

    Tasha

  2. Hi Tasha,

    First, thanks for being a loyal reader.

    Your sense of what happens next may be right, but don’t expect me to give it away!!

    PlotDog

  3. I’m gonna read this from the start, I think this is a very good story.

    Gary

  4. Gary,

    Thanks for the comment. Having a producer drop into the middle of the script and want to read it from the beginning is real motivation to keep writing scripts. I can send you a full copy of Intervention or any of my three other finished scripts, if you are interested.

    PlotDog

  5. fun little scene, thanks for sharing. i think this could be a good story.

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