Scene 46 – Intervention – Serial Suspense Screenplay
Oct 25th, 2009 | By PlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized ScreenplayThe continuation of the Serial Suspense Screenplay "Intervention" by Terry L. Raun. To read this from the beginning go HERE.
INT. DICK AND JANE'S HOUSE - STAIRS -- MOMENTS LATER
Jane runs upstairs, with the phone in hand.
OPERATOR
Please state the nature of your emergency.
JANE
Stop hurting us.
INT. DICK AND JANE'S HOUSE - UPSTAIRS HALL -- MOMENTS LATER
Jane steps into the bedroom doorway. She swings the door
and slams it on her bicep. She screams by the phone,
winces, adjusts her arm and swings the door open again.
In the background, Sara's door begins to open.
SLAM...Jane crushes her arm in the door once again... She
screams and still, she opens the door once again.
Sara's door opens fully.
Sara stares. Dick's eyes meet Sara's.
Momentary doubt clouds Jane's face, but in the end, JUST
PLAIN NUTS wins and she SLAMS the door yet again.
Sara screams. Dick races for Sara and pushes Jane away
from the door. Jane falls in the broken glass and gets
more lacerations. Dick grabs Sara, who is screaming; Jane
cradles the phone. Dick cradles Sara.
DICK
Are you crazy?
JANE
Sara, hide in your room.
SARA
Daddy, how did mommy get so hurt?
DICK
Mommy is having a problem, you
know I wouldn't hurt you. Right
Baby?
SARA
Never daddy, you love me. I
know.
EXT. DICK AND JANE'S FRONT DOOR -- MOMENTS LATER
The screaming has stopped, blue and red lights strobe
through the window. The cops are outside the house door,
knocking.
INT. DICK AND JANE'S FRONT HALL -- MOMENTS LATER
OPERATOR
The police are on the way.
JANE
HELP. He hit me with a bat, he's
hurting me, my little girl, he
has Sara....help!
COPS OUTSIDE
Ma'am, is he still armed?
EXT. DICK AND JANE'S HOUSE - COP'S RADIO -- MOMENTS LATER
The cop pounds the door; cop cars pull up, lights spinning.
Jane trashes the place, breaks glass and, in a psychotic
glee, destroys everything hurting herself even more.
Dick holds Sara and tries to cover her eyes.
SARA
Daddy, is mommy OK?
JANE
He's going to kill me and the
baby!
EXT. DICK AND JANE'S FRONT DOOR -- MOMENTS LATER
The woman cop breaks the glass window by the door. Jane's
screams combine with the sirens and police radios. Chaos.
INT. DICK AND JANE'S HOUSE - UPSTAIRS -- MOMENTS LATER
Dick enfolds Sara, the door crashes open, cops rush in
P.O.V. FEMALE COP -- MOMENTS LATER
Blue and red lights into the house. Jane drags herself
into the upstairs hallway, bloody, beaten and screaming.
The male cop stops at Jane. Her clothes expose her in a
victim sort of way; blood is on her face and arms.
To read the suspense screenplay "Intervention" from the Beginning go HERE







Sorry, I haven’t been here a while. I want to find out what happens next now; therefore, I’m hopping on to the next one.
Good stuff, by the way. Getting more exciting. Jane is surely crazy. She needs some psychiatric intervention, ya think?