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Intervention - Scene 27

Nov 1st, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

INT. DICK AND JANE’S PARTY — LATER

The crowd mixes and mingles. Cokes at one table, alcohol
at another. A rich patron has a burning cigarette. There
are no ashtrays, he puts the butt out in his glass. Jane
graciously takes the glass and brings him another.



Intervention - Scene 24

Oct 10th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

INT. TREATMENT FACILITY MAIN ROOM — AFTERNOON

The patients mill about the main room in various states of
mental focus. The room feels dangerous.

Jane speaks, the lead counselor watches. Alex scowls from
the back of the room. Patients look to Alex for clues.



Intervention - Scene 23

Oct 2nd, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

INT. MAIN TREATMENT AREA — MOMENTS LATER

               Jane and the Lead walk to the main treatment area.  A woman
               sits in the corner.  As Jane approaches, the woman’s head
               turns.  It is Alex the server girl.



Intervention - Scene 21

Sep 18th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

               INT. "BABY BARE" STRIP BAR — AFTERNOON

               Dick and Carl walk in.  A neon light, "BABY BARE" glows over
               a worn but cared for bar.  This is not a gentleman’s club.
               Neon lights, smoke, bottles of beer and breasts abound.  

                                   DANCING GIRL



Intervention - Scene 20

Sep 10th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

               INT. DICK AND JANE BEDROOM AT HOME — THAT SAME NIGHT

               Jane leads Dick into the bedroom, she’s wearing the same
               clothes she was wearing with the Senator.  She begins to
               undress.

                                   JANE
                         Talk to me while I shower.



Intervention - Scene 19

Sep 3rd, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

INT. SENATOR’S HOME OFFICE — DAY

The office exudes power. The Senator reclines with a scotch.
He hands one to Jane. She moves close.

SENATOR STEWART
When does treatment start?

JANE
Next week. Alan, I wanted to
say…



Intervention - Scene 17

Aug 20th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

ASSISTANT DISTRICT ATTORNEY JOHNSON shakes hands with Decker.

GRIFFIN DECKER
Tim, nice to see you again.

ADA JOHNSON
Wheels are turning, as we speak.



Intervention - Scene 16

Aug 13th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

INT. SECOND INTERROGATION ROOM — MOMENTS LATER

               Jane sits with Decker across the table.

                                   JANE
                         Alan sent you?

                                   GRIFFIN DECKER
                         The wheels are rolling in the
                         prosecutor’s office, as we speak.



Intervention - Scene 15

Aug 6th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

 INT. POLICE STATION INTERROGATION ROOM — NEXT MORNING

 

               Dick and Jane sit.  The morning Sun shows Jane more widely

               awake and Dick looking resolute, beaten and pissed.

 


Intervention - Scene 14

Jul 30th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

              INT. CAR IN USED CAR LOT — MOMENTS LATER

                                   DICK
                         Stop the car.  Trade me places.



Intervention Chapter 2 - FIRST DRAFT

Jul 28th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: A Novel Approach, Book

A Novel Approach - Intervention the Novel, FIRST DRAFT, please feel free to give feedback.

Jane Jordan finished locking down the convertible top of the candy apple red, 1957, classic Corvette and fit her lithe, aerobically perfect, body into the pristine leather seats of the car’s cockpit as she struggled to avoid thinking about her husband Dick. She cranked Van Halen rock and roll at old school volumes and scanned the road for cops and then for drivers she might be able to push into their own road rage.



Intervention - Scene 13

Jul 22nd, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

                INT. CAR — RACING THROUGH DOWN TOWN — MOMENTS LATER

                                   JANE
                         Buckle up.

               Dick fearfully fumbles with his seat belt.

               EXT. — CAR RACING DOWN THE STREET — MOMENTS LATER



Intervention - Scene 12

Jul 15th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

 INT. NEW BLACK BMW — NIGHT

               Jane’s head lulls back and she closes her eyes.  Dick
               tentatively reaches for the keys.  Closer…closer until his
               crushed fingers touch the key.  Jane snaps awake.



Intervention - Scene 8

Jun 15th, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

 
               EXT. AT PARTY — EVENING
               Dick and Jane exit the car.  Jane smiles and leads Dick to
               SENATOR ALAN STEWART.  He is as attractive as Jane and
               obviously very powerful.  He holds court by a pool.
                                   SENATOR STEWART
                         Jane, so glad you could make it.  I
                         hope it wasn’t an inconvenience.
                         Not much [...]



Intervention - Scene 7

Jun 2nd, 2008 | By User ImagePlotDog | Category: Intervention, Serialized Screenplay

 INT. NEW BLACK BMW — EVENING
               Dick stares out the window of the BMW.  Dick and Jane are
               dressed in their party best.  Jane is driving aggressively.
                                   JANE
                         It’s not just for me, Dick you can
                         find new clients for your company
                         and I can connect more firmly with
                         Senator Stewart.  We can get you
                         [...]